Angel of Death

Hey there! I quite liked this poem and am glad to see that you didn't stress a rhyming scheme, you just let the words flow and this is really beautiful. ...

Hey there Writer! One of the things about poetry is that the lines between different genres of poetry can be easily blurred. For example, you posted this in Lyric Poetry ...

Hey there Miss Slade! I quite like this but I feel like the formatting of this poem really messed it up. In my opinion, people should stick to stanzas, it ...

Hey there Merry! I am so excited to read this! A clear water droplet trickled down the window panel. The faster it came down the windowsill, the other droplets followed. ...

Hey Shina! You already got some good reviews, so I'm just going to talk about the content. I liked it, a lot. It had a message and it was powerful ...

Whah! Is this even...Pork? W-O-W *moment of silence* EPIC WIN. I really enjoyed this. It was dark and sick and funny, the type of story I needed at this time ...

Hey there Raymond! Welcome to YWS, I'm Angel of Death but everyone calls me Angel. Okay, I haven't written a poem in a while, but this used to be what ...

Hey Jared! I'm so glad this is finally posted! By the way, I like how you have dictionary definitions at the beginning of each part. I watched the blood trickle ...

Ha! I think Lost has lost it. Just think, if she saw Henry Murdoch walking down the street she'd half faint from shock. :lol: But Henry is a good character. ...

Hello Olivia! How've you been? Well, I quite liked this. The person before me picked out the two nit-picks I had seen, so I'll just go into content. I think ...

Hey there, Shina! (did I spell that right?) Well, I'm here as I promised. I've only did the prologue and the first chapter cuz I have to get off in ...

Hey Sarah! I really really love this chapter! It was much improved as the others and I think you're finally grasping Anne's character. I like that you described the carriage ...

Hey Sarah! I think this deserves to be another one of my favorite pieces by you. I like it's simple complexities and the beautiful metaphors and words you use. It's ...

Hello there! I did really enjoy this but I think you're not taking advantage of what potential this story has. You really should think about making this longer and have ...

Hello there! Hmm, I think this has the potential to be something greater. It just seems like you have one huge sentence that's simply a statement. Throw in some colorful ...